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Firepaw-The chosen one by Shine--Cat Firepaw-The chosen one by Shine--Cat
For some reason I felt like drawing warriors cats,so I decided to draw Firestar as an apprentice. :D Hope you like it!

EDIT:Allowing critiques. This sucks,so...-Dec 20.
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Critique by Oceaninc Dec 20, 2012, 3:58:43 PM
Bad: The Anatomy "sucks"
The tail is shown to be connected to the back leg.
The weird glow around the edge doesn't help ether
The eyes are WAY to huge.
The ear's about 1/3 of the face themsselves, and they should be less then 1/4 of the face's size.
The Front legs confuse me, its ether one that shows, which is not atomically correct. Or its 2 with a huge space in the center, which is also not atomically correct.
The nose is 1/8 of the face, and its just sitting their, not interesting.
OK- The stars and moon are OK. the stars are nice w/ the differing light, the moon has an awkward glow to it.
Good: I don't see anything good about this picture.
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Well, I'll say a few improvement points.

-The colouring goes over the lineart, which looks a bit messy.
- The front leg seems to merge into the torso.
- The back leg has been lost in oblivion.
- The shading should be inside the lines rather than all over the place.
- The eyes take up the majority of the face.

One way to improve drawing skills is using references from photos of cats, this helps improve anatomy by a lot it helped me and also it has worked for many other people.

I hope you take my advice into consideration, good luck with your art in the future.
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Oceaninc Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Can you request critiquing for this? I would like to do a critique
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Shine--Cat Dec 20, 2012   Digital Artist
Of course. If you say something that sounds mean I won't care,because it SUCKS


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Oceaninc Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Like edit and on the sumission page
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Shine--Cat Dec 20, 2012   Digital Artist
Yes,I know. The critiques are open
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Oceaninc Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you
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Shine--Cat Dec 20, 2012   Digital Artist
Anytime
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Oceaninc Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks
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violetea Sep 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I love the shading owo
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Shine--Cat Sep 6, 2012   Digital Artist
:D ty
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violetea Sep 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Welcome
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